A-while ago I finished the lettering on page 4 of Transplant and was quite happy but the other day I was watching a episode of Criminal Minds and the unsub was talking to his mother about these dreams he's been having. This interaction got me thinking about my own scene when Mike is talking about his dreams about Michelle and a heart, at first the conversation made out that this was the first time, then after watching that episode I decided to make the dreams something that's been happening awhile as it gives the dream sequence some more context but also makes the pages flow alot better.
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| on the left the original text and on the right is the re-write |
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| on the left the original text and on the right is the re-write |
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