tweaks

After a tutorial yesterday it was pointed out to me that some of my pages could be reworked to either improve the overall feel of the comic or to add needed consistences below are some of the pages that have the biggest changes.  

This is the page with the changes as if you look at the page below you will see a massive difference in the flow and quality of work produced. I am happy with these improvements and glad I listened to my tutors advice as in my opinion enhanced my work.

The original page I showed to my tutor I already wasn't sure about this page but I wanted a second opinion before I made any changes.



I hope now I will be able to move on to the coloring stage and show you some colored pages.